Original design
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| © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
After receiving feedback from my tutorial I am working on redesigning the free post bag. I originally chose a brown colour as I had only considered using the brown post envelope as the material for the bag. However, this is not appealing to the audience. In order to make the bag more appealing, I have tried experimenting with patterns as suggested by the feedback that I received.
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| 1. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 2. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 3. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 4. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 5. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 6. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 7. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 8. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
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| 9. © Kasumi Miyake 2011 |
I have focussed on floral and lace patterns to anchor the concept of undergarments and create a feminine aesthetic. I think number 1, 5 and 7 are the strongest developments. However, I am not sure if number one has the right aesthetic to fit with the scheme as the visual aesthetic is very modern.
Which one appeals to you best?
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