|1. © Kasumi Miyake 2011|
The pink background is too overpowering. This makes the typography not as legible. A lighter colour choice to create a starker contrast between the deep typographic colours would improve legibility.
|2. © Kasumi Miyake 2011|
|3. © Kasumi Miyake 2011|
I will consider trying out different colour ways as I feel that the ribbon typography may not be the best colour choice.
I have experimented with different colour ways, to create a softer and more elegant aesthetic to the refined compositions above.
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|6. © Kasumi Miyake 2011|
I feel that this colour choice is much more better than the previous colour way. Out of all the compositions, number 6 is the strongest composition as it attracts attention through the pattern detail whilst maintaining a balanced composition.